Friday, October 2, 2015

To personal no Information

    On Friday October 2 2015 the USA today published an article written by Andy Parker titled “ Oregon shooting shows we are at war.” 
   All through out the article Parker stated how we are at war on weather we should take away the right of guns or keep it. In the article he hows the 2 sides of this “war” the side of the National Rifle Association and the side of the families that have lost their loved ones by shooters or anything involving guns, but he makes it personal stating that he and his wife joined the group of families who have lost their loved ones almost a month ago. After he gives us information of how many more people join in every year. All thru ought out the article he makes it to personal with also sharing his story of how he lost his daughter and only putting one side when it should of been only about facts. Although I do understand the attachment he has on this article with loosing his loved one. The article its self is written well but there is no information about what happened in Oregon and the shooting that happened at a community college, he mostly informs us about how he feels about guns. In my opinion the article would of been better if he would informed us not only about his personal experience about losing a loved one but if he also informed us of how everything that happened in Oregon, how the students felt and those who saw it happening he should of given us primary sources point of views. 

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